A realistic Ironman

The writer gains the readers' attention by introducing who Tony Stark is, which if you have not seen Iron Man, would be completely clueless as to the existence of this character. I like the writer's diction, it is bold and interesting. It says "I don't care that this is an academic paper, I am going to speak my mind." I like how they compare Tony Stark, an imaginary person, to real people and bash the real people for being famous for doing nothing when someone who is smart and actually did something should be considered an idle. But who is Elon Musk? He is Iron Man? I like how the writer begins his paper by talking about a character we are likely to know as an introduction to his real topic. I have never heard of Elon Musk before but I have heard of his products so it is cool learning about this extraordinary man. It is good that he keeps connecting the two subjects throughout the paper because if he forgot about Iron Man then the introduction would be confusing and pointless. I like how he really sells Musk and explains him and his motivation for what he does. The paper is well written, formatted and structured. I maintained interest the entire time and enjoyed it.