The author’s best idea was writing about a childhood toy
that is loved and looked back on fondly. I personally know many college
students who still own and use Nerf guns currently. They are the perfect
harmless toy that leads to hours and hours of entertainment. The author gains
the readers’ interest by starting the paper out with a broad topic that left
you asking “what is he talking about?” He continued his interesting topic by giving
background information on the most important guy throughout the paper so that
the reader could get to know him and develop a relationship with him as they
continued reading and learning about this man’s life. He was most successful in
his paragraphs where he talked about the design process and how the employees
work to design toys for the kids. My favorite part was the ending when he
mentions the kids having a capture the flag game with the hundreds of darts all
across the field. The author was very creative in how he approached this topic,
it could have been boring but the way he structured it and the details he
included saved it from being a snooze fest. I was really interested in learning
about a toy from my childhood that I still use today sometimes that I had never
given much thought to.
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